Hehe, this was fun. You sneakily made it feel like not too far off canon and yet had so much going on behind the scenes. A very nice read! And the G/B nookie was surprisingly hot, despite being on the wrong side of rough for me.
Another thing I really admire is how you seem to catch all those little bits of info that we usually don't notice and connect them to a bigger issue. How Ziyal would be living alone with Kira at the O'Briens', how the rest of Garak and Quark's 'arrangement' turned out when it wasn't actually needed anymore and how Brunt was totally on the spot too quickly to be coincidence.
Very good work! And can I just wedge in a little squee here at the increased G/B goodness?? *tiny squee*
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Date: 2010-06-23 06:10 pm (UTC)Another thing I really admire is how you seem to catch all those little bits of info that we usually don't notice and connect them to a bigger issue. How Ziyal would be living alone with Kira at the O'Briens', how the rest of Garak and Quark's 'arrangement' turned out when it wasn't actually needed anymore and how Brunt was totally on the spot too quickly to be coincidence.
Very good work! And can I just wedge in a little squee here at the increased G/B goodness?? *tiny squee*